10. Tommy's Room

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heheh

Dake's cute.

I don't understand the second panel, though. At least Tommy's eyebrows shrunk back down to regular size.

But seriously, what is happening in the second panel. The two of them, as stick figures, are just standing there and there are invisible people by them. Plus the walls are uneven.

Dake's really cute in the third panel, though, as a stick figure. I think he's supposed to be humming as he bounces around and falls down.

Although there is one more thing bugging me, how did Dake hurt his bum if  he fell down face first?

And one of Tommy's pics seems to be levitating in the last panel. The middle one.

Oh, and the reason Dake's blushing is because Tommy is standing in front of him half naked and Dake has a major crush on him. In case you didn't already know that.

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