18. Pretty Pencil!

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Ohhhh...

Perty pencil! Supposedly this is that original comic page before it's inked. I think it looks better.

And that shadowing is awesome.

We find out what happened to Dake, here. He was dropped. And he's being stupid by not running away. But then there'd be no story, would there?

Hmmmm....poor Tommy. that looks like it hurt.

Although I do wonder how the demon managed to change it's grip so much. You see how in the first panel he's holding it a lot closer to the foot then he is in the other?

Meh, probably just me.

The demons looks cool in pencil though...Actually, all of them look better in pencil...

So tell the author you like it in pencil better. Maybe she'll keep it this way!

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