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Commentary Aw.... Poor little Dake's crying... And Tommy's not helping much at all. 'Crying is for the weak and powerless'? That's just mean.... But at least he's finally seeming to take an interest in Dake other then by bullying him. Wonder what he's handing him in the last panel? guess we'll have to wait and see. Hmmm... I can't find much wrong with this page; except that in the 3rd panel you can't really tell if it's Dake or Tommy (except for the fact that he's crying) and Tommy's hand is sorta blurry in the last panel. Also, both of them seem a bit 'out of proportion' in the last panel. But maybe that's just me. At least Tommy seems to be trying to help Dake in some way. laters- |
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Story and all characters and original works (c) 2004-2005 Shea Britton and all web layouts and setup stuff (c) the Web Mistress unless otherwise specified. You steal, we set Cain on you.