34. Dressing

Commentary

More a servant then a slave? That's good.

Although it is surprising Dake's so happy in the first panel. Ya know, considering he was sold into slavery and separated from Tommy who is God knows where...

Guess we'll see his new cloths next time.

Oh, I think it's Samsol pointing in the third (fourth?) panel there. Eila doesn't have claws and he does.

And did the author, at any point, mention that Eila is blind? Well, she is. that's why her eyes always look so blank.

Hmmm...

Can't really find anything else wriong with the page 'cept for the fact taht the screen magically grows while Dake is behind it. And that his face seems to change shape a few times.

But it's all good.

^_^

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