15. Too Busy

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Awww..

That's sad.

Tommy's boyfriend is too busy to help him escape from the bad slave owner that rapes him regularly.

-.-

I still don't accept that not even Tommy's grandfather will help him escape.

Mrgh.

But there IS a good reason. One that hasn't been explained yet.

Or at least, that's what I've been told.

There really isn't anything wrong with this page. The only slight thing I can find is that the color of Adriel's hair and wings seems a bit too dark.

But that's probably just the light I'm looking at the page under.

's it.

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