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Commentary Ohhhh... This REALLY can't be good. Poor Tommy. This page... looks good, but for some reason it looks like Jezabelle changed cloths and the colors inside the house changed. I can't really tell but it looks like what broke is a lamp of some kind. I also can't really tell what's in the scenery behind Tommy as he's entering. This looks like an interesting plot starter though. But poor Tommy... This really won't be pleasant for him. Wonder if the author's gonna go into it? Hmmm. seeya - |
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