Chapter 7

Commentary

WOOT!

New chapter!

This one will be considerably...juicier.

And I'll bet you can tell what's going to happen.

Ummm...

I dunno, I think a bunch of the other covers were better.

This one's not bad, especially the expressions, but for some reason Tommy's hand seems pretty big and there seem to be a bunch of little black things in the background.

But...maybe they're soot or something, some kind of foretelling?

I dunno.

Like I said, the expressions are awesome.

And I hope you guys like this chapter.

^_^

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